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Love and Perfect Harmony

Sun, 5 May 2013, 02:03 pm
Gordon the Optom12 posts in thread

‘Love and Perfect Harmony’ is a comedy by Raymond Hopkins, a writer from Oxford in the UK. Raymond generously donates his royalties to the MS Society, and the Endeavour Theatre Company also gives part of their takings. So far Raymond has donated an amazing $40,000.

Endeavour is presenting this play in the Hamersley Community Centre, Belvedere Road, Hamersley on Friday and Saturday nights until the 11th May. The two and a half hour shows start at 8.00 pm.

 

 

The stage has black drapes for the walls, but is well set out as a rehearsal room in a community centre in the South of England.

      The choral society is gathered for another rehearsal, when the nervous and shy conductor, Tim (Ryszard Gorell) makes an announcement. The group have been chosen to represent the area in the international choral competition in Austria.

      Pregnant Odette (Sandy Marwick) is worried whether or not her bump will hang on long enough. As enthusiastic photographer, Cyril (Ken Banks) starts planning his next photo shoot, Beryl (Denise Mignon) arrives with her best friend of 40 years, Edith (Rebecca Morgan). Beryl and Edith started life in a rough area, but Edith has gone up in the world and is now the Mayor’s wife.
      Being in such an exalted position, Edith is most distressed that her innocent daughter, Jenny (Amy McDonnell) is going with Hugh (Russell Lambe) the son of the local drunk, Gavin (Will Marwick). However, being the self-appointed star of the society, Edith is thrilled that she will have a major starring role. Then .... Carrie arrives. Carrie (Ro Gorell) has the voice of an angel and it becomes obvious that Edith is going to have her nose put out of joint.

      Who will sing at the competition and will the group ever be the same again?

 


Sadly this is a good news / bad news review.

The good: The welcome to this ‘hall’ style theatre is very cordial. The stage is well equipped. The lighting design and operation (Linda Clucas) was very good. The set and props (Angelica Franz) were sufficient and effective for a small production. A good programme.

The actors enunciated well, and a couple of actors were very good.

The sad part:  One of the main actors had to be prompted for 25% of her lines. Another 20% she ad-libbed. This is the greatest amount of prompting I have ever seen – including last minute school plays. This actor has been around for a while, but such a poor performance dragged down the others that were trying hard, often throwing them into disarray. That is not fair to the other cast members.

The direction was almost nil. The actors lined up to exit and enter the stage. With a large cast on stage it is always difficult to have plenty of action, but to have none and the cast almost static in a semicircle for the whole play shows lack of thought and effort. When two people are talking alone, putting two chairs in the centre of the stage isn’t really the answer. Often the cast were lost, floundering and bewildered through lack of guidance.
There were about three music cues in the script. When the conductor bent down to turn off the tape recorder, a cue was missed, he bent down again, the cue was missed again – the music continued – he bent down for a third time and even then the music did not stop quite in time with his action.

The pace was about 20% too long, although the constant fluffs were responsible for most of the poor chemistry and delivery.

The script had plenty of jokes and asides, but the actors really didn’t know how to deliver this style of lines.

I met a couple and their two teenage daughters that were up in Perth for the weekend, and the parents wanted to take their girls to see an ‘age appropriate’ community theatre play. They didn’t know where Hamersley was – neither did I – but made the journey to see it. They quite enjoyed the play, but the girls may have been put off for some time to come.

The worst show that I have seen in two or three years? Possibly.

I found this night truly sad. I could see a very capable group, absolutely filled with enthusiasm and potential, dithering around. Perhaps acting for another theatre group, to find out what quality and standards are expected and return to Endeavour. You have the talent; don’t lose your audience before you find the skills. I will return and hope to find a focused, invigorated group.

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Gordon the OptomSun, 5 May 2013, 02:03 pm

‘Love and Perfect Harmony’ is a comedy by Raymond Hopkins, a writer from Oxford in the UK. Raymond generously donates his royalties to the MS Society, and the Endeavour Theatre Company also gives part of their takings. So far Raymond has donated an amazing $40,000.

Endeavour is presenting this play in the Hamersley Community Centre, Belvedere Road, Hamersley on Friday and Saturday nights until the 11th May. The two and a half hour shows start at 8.00 pm.

 

 

The stage has black drapes for the walls, but is well set out as a rehearsal room in a community centre in the South of England.

      The choral society is gathered for another rehearsal, when the nervous and shy conductor, Tim (Ryszard Gorell) makes an announcement. The group have been chosen to represent the area in the international choral competition in Austria.

      Pregnant Odette (Sandy Marwick) is worried whether or not her bump will hang on long enough. As enthusiastic photographer, Cyril (Ken Banks) starts planning his next photo shoot, Beryl (Denise Mignon) arrives with her best friend of 40 years, Edith (Rebecca Morgan). Beryl and Edith started life in a rough area, but Edith has gone up in the world and is now the Mayor’s wife.
      Being in such an exalted position, Edith is most distressed that her innocent daughter, Jenny (Amy McDonnell) is going with Hugh (Russell Lambe) the son of the local drunk, Gavin (Will Marwick). However, being the self-appointed star of the society, Edith is thrilled that she will have a major starring role. Then .... Carrie arrives. Carrie (Ro Gorell) has the voice of an angel and it becomes obvious that Edith is going to have her nose put out of joint.

      Who will sing at the competition and will the group ever be the same again?

 


Sadly this is a good news / bad news review.

The good: The welcome to this ‘hall’ style theatre is very cordial. The stage is well equipped. The lighting design and operation (Linda Clucas) was very good. The set and props (Angelica Franz) were sufficient and effective for a small production. A good programme.

The actors enunciated well, and a couple of actors were very good.

The sad part:  One of the main actors had to be prompted for 25% of her lines. Another 20% she ad-libbed. This is the greatest amount of prompting I have ever seen – including last minute school plays. This actor has been around for a while, but such a poor performance dragged down the others that were trying hard, often throwing them into disarray. That is not fair to the other cast members.

The direction was almost nil. The actors lined up to exit and enter the stage. With a large cast on stage it is always difficult to have plenty of action, but to have none and the cast almost static in a semicircle for the whole play shows lack of thought and effort. When two people are talking alone, putting two chairs in the centre of the stage isn’t really the answer. Often the cast were lost, floundering and bewildered through lack of guidance.
There were about three music cues in the script. When the conductor bent down to turn off the tape recorder, a cue was missed, he bent down again, the cue was missed again – the music continued – he bent down for a third time and even then the music did not stop quite in time with his action.

The pace was about 20% too long, although the constant fluffs were responsible for most of the poor chemistry and delivery.

The script had plenty of jokes and asides, but the actors really didn’t know how to deliver this style of lines.

I met a couple and their two teenage daughters that were up in Perth for the weekend, and the parents wanted to take their girls to see an ‘age appropriate’ community theatre play. They didn’t know where Hamersley was – neither did I – but made the journey to see it. They quite enjoyed the play, but the girls may have been put off for some time to come.

The worst show that I have seen in two or three years? Possibly.

I found this night truly sad. I could see a very capable group, absolutely filled with enthusiasm and potential, dithering around. Perhaps acting for another theatre group, to find out what quality and standards are expected and return to Endeavour. You have the talent; don’t lose your audience before you find the skills. I will return and hope to find a focused, invigorated group.

Walter PlingeMon, 6 May 2013, 10:41 am

Well I went to the

Well I went to the performance on Saturday night and thoroughly enjoyed it. It was a great show - I had a good laugh, and I thought they did very well. Would recommend it to anyone.
Walter PlingeMon, 6 May 2013, 11:55 am

How do we know you're not

How do we know you're not one of the cast posting here?
Bass GuyMon, 6 May 2013, 08:54 pm

This is the thing.

You don't. We have had instances on this forum where the director of a show that received less than glowing reviews has used the Plinge pseudonym to attack the reviewer. All the more reason to remove the "privilege" of anonymous postings (or unregistered postings at the very least). Sadly this request continues to fall on the deaf ears of certain administrators....despite their insistence that we "don't feed trolls". The best way to starve trolls is to deny the fuckers access to the site. I tire of having to demand this rational way of doing things. Eliot McCann
NaTue, 7 May 2013, 08:15 am

I'm not sure whether this

I'm not sure whether this comment is aimed at Jeff, or the wider admin group, but as one of the (technically) admins... Grant is the be all and end all of how this site is run. Whatever mine and Jeff's opinions about anonymity, the issue of implementing it or not remains in the hands of someone else. Of course, registration does not and will not prevent trolling or fake accounts and sock puppetry... which is probably Grant's point in the first place. /end saving one person by throwing the other under the bus ;)
Bass GuyTue, 7 May 2013, 02:13 pm

Every little helps.

"Of course, registration does not and will not prevent trolling or fake accounts and sock puppetry...." It would certainly cut it down though. Particularly the raft of spam gibberish this site seems to come under attack from. I maintain it is at least worth a try. When/if it fails, then you can feel free to poo-pooh the idea as folly. But not until then. Eliot
NaTue, 7 May 2013, 09:14 pm

I don't disagree with you.

I don't disagree with you. I'm just saying that the conversation has been had numerous times before and that the guy to talk to about it is Grant. As for the spam, it seems someone specifically is directing themselves at this site knowing that it can post hundreds of links before anyone notices and removes them. I consider the spam filters here to be pretty basic and I know Jeff is working on ways to tweak them. Again, registration won't stop it, as many other forums and blogs have discovered. I'm actually surprised that the site keeps out 90% of it already. But anyway, I'm no longer in this fight. I've made my arguments, they've not convinced Grant and now I pass the baton to you :)
LabrugTue, 7 May 2013, 10:59 pm

One thing

The SPAM Filters may be rather simple, but I will say they are proving to be very robust. I have worked on best coding practices for Filters and they currently capture over 85% of all SPAM that comes through. The ones that tend to slip through are where the comment is a little dodgy in content but does not actually contain any harmful links, or new web sites that have previously not been encountered.

 On the whole, it does a rather impressive job.

Absit invidia (and DFT :nono:)

Jeff Watkins

Walter PlingeTue, 7 May 2013, 11:53 pm

Maybe the play was

Maybe the play was deliberately crap.
LogosWed, 8 May 2013, 09:47 am

I'm with you Eliot

I think registration to make comments should be compulsory becuase my attitude towards free speech, which I defend almost obsessively, is that it should also require responsibilty for comments and attitudes. I've been in trouble myself once or twice for comments I've made but I have always been prepared to identify myself. Is that all there is? Well if that's all there is my friend, then let's keep dancing. www.tonymoore.id.au www.moorebooks.net.au
Bass GuyWed, 8 May 2013, 01:21 pm

New poll?

I think it's worth putting to a vote on the forum, for those with opinions on the matter. What you think, folks? El
NaWed, 8 May 2013, 02:07 pm

I doubt it will change much

I doubt it will change much from the 2011 one: http://www.theatre.asn.au/poll/guest_vs_user_2011 or this one: http://www.theatre.asn.au/poll/forum_posts
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